To me the first draft is not that different from later versions. Not that I don't have lot of things to fix after that, but still, you recognized the finished product in that first version too. For me the first version is about getting my point across, and the second to adjust the volume to the proper level needed to tell the story in the best possible way.
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Date: 2009-05-12 12:16 am (UTC)